I was quite surprised by this story and how much I enjoyed it! Definitely interested to see more of Dave and how things go for him in some new stories.

So this story gave me a lot of anxiety, mostly from relating to Rachel's anxiety over the money--I think many people can relate. It doesn't quite reach the pinnacle of great story telling, I think because there was a bit too much repetitive back and forth with her and Anna; while I appreciate that she was being truthful to reality, I just feel that there had to have been another way to convey all of that that wasn't quite so clinical, I suppose. Regardless, what a harrowing experience and I wish Rachel all the best in her future.

2.5 mostly because there seems to be a lot of plot and context missing that makes the end weird as hell.