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3.0

So this story gave me a lot of anxiety, mostly from relating to Rachel's anxiety over the money--I think many people can relate. It doesn't quite reach the pinnacle of great story telling, I think because there was a bit too much repetitive back and forth with her and Anna; while I appreciate that she was being truthful to reality, I just feel that there had to have been another way to convey all of that that wasn't quite so clinical, I suppose. Regardless, what a harrowing experience and I wish Rachel all the best in her future.