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Loved it. Found I related to it really well even with the romance.
Didnt like how much ground it tried to cover in the last chapter. Not enough time to do it properly
Didnt like how much ground it tried to cover in the last chapter. Not enough time to do it properly
It's obviously good quality but I found reading this so stressful that if I hadn't been worried about returning the library copy I probably would have gone much slower or soft dnfed. There's a lot of tension and I didn't buy any of the release. I want my reading about families to give me a sense of movement or something new to think about in the stuck. This one just did a really good job of replicating my anxiety about my own family and leaving me in the same passive aggressive helplessness as real life.
I love this and think its endearing and hilarious, despite being driven up a tree by the protagonist.
The villian(s) really worked for me. Chills.
The post reality setting did not work for me at all. I would rather you write a second world fantasy if you're going to do that much original worldbuilding. If you're going to drum up all the apacalypse in the real world feelings that will make the book anxiety inducing for me to read, I need the reality of it to be the point not just part of the premise. Giving cheeto caligulas slogans to a secondary world character would be a little heavy handed as a metaphor but fine. Giving them to a character in this world without acknowledging that based on the premise of your own fiction these were already used in a different context that your characters (who knew about the holocaust) might have known about strikes me as evoking the feelings and not doing anything with them.
The post reality setting did not work for me at all. I would rather you write a second world fantasy if you're going to do that much original worldbuilding. If you're going to drum up all the apacalypse in the real world feelings that will make the book anxiety inducing for me to read, I need the reality of it to be the point not just part of the premise. Giving cheeto caligulas slogans to a secondary world character would be a little heavy handed as a metaphor but fine. Giving them to a character in this world without acknowledging that based on the premise of your own fiction these were already used in a different context that your characters (who knew about the holocaust) might have known about strikes me as evoking the feelings and not doing anything with them.
Wow that was quite sensually intense wasn't it? Fantastic prose.
It is definitely not the place to start the series. I'm so not used to canon sapphic themes that it felt like reading fanfic for a properly I'm not familiar with. It was extremely pretty feel good and actually canon I hear so I am interested in the property as a whole now.