really tried to get through this because it has queer representation, but my god this was a waste of my time. you can’t erase terrible writing by calling it “whimsical” be serious, and half the dialogue in this book is odd and misplaced?? there were responses that just didn’t make sense, and subject switches that didn’t track at all. 

i did enjoy rafe’s POV though at least

annoying

miscommunication trope i fucking hate it