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711 reviews
Reading this book was like being the rope in a tug of war.
It's short when it could have been longer to flesh things out. Seems like no one is willing to explain to the FMC what her magic is or help her figure it out (for everyone's safety-- they keep telling her how dangerous it is if she can't control it). They keep talking about how deadly the school is and like why...why must we kill all these magic users just to put her in a dangerous spot?
Also the hot and cold thing she has with the incubus and the shifter? Eyeroll.
I think if we had more story to kinda flesh it out...like maybe a hundred more pages...It would have read like a really good story instead of an AO3 story by a newbie whose hashtags are #nobetawedielikemen and #plotwhatplot
It's short when it could have been longer to flesh things out. Seems like no one is willing to explain to the FMC what her magic is or help her figure it out (for everyone's safety-- they keep telling her how dangerous it is if she can't control it). They keep talking about how deadly the school is and like why...why must we kill all these magic users just to put her in a dangerous spot?
Also the hot and cold thing she has with the incubus and the shifter? Eyeroll.
I think if we had more story to kinda flesh it out...like maybe a hundred more pages...It would have read like a really good story instead of an AO3 story by a newbie whose hashtags are #nobetawedielikemen and #plotwhatplot
emotional
funny
hopeful
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
adventurous
funny
hopeful
fast-paced
I Went on an Adventure and All I Got Was This Barbarian Orc: Crack Fantasy Adventure Chapter Four
adventurous
funny
fast-paced
I Went on an Adventure and All I Got Was This Barbarian Orc: Crack Fantasy Adventure Chapter Three
adventurous
funny
fast-paced
adventurous
funny
fast-paced
adventurous
funny
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
A mix
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes