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There's potential.

A little too much repetition of some of the plot points.

Hockessin Library 5&6 Year Old Book Group - November 2023

Hockessin Library 5&6 Year Old Book Group - November 2023

A couple of phrases could have been reworded to either not repeat something that was said a couple of pages before or to not make the inner monolog of the character make them out to seem clueless.

Felt like it was over before it had begun.