My thoughts while reading the end of the second story - I just got to the end of john and Henry's story and my heart is bursting and I think I'm throwing love hearts out of my eyes.

And while reading the third story - The flirting in this third hamilton story is top tier.

First, the title makes no sense. Ben was all in. Ian had reservations. And the one moment Ben took a step back Ian didn't pursue.

Secondly, the writing was young sounding. Came off sounding like a high schooler was writing a spicy book.

The plot line is weak and full of holes.

Words completely missing or used incorrectly in sentences.

And it's supposed to be dark. He's a mafia Don. They have rough sex and he likes to put his hand at her throat. Not dark.