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should have been included in the original book! such a nice touch and an updated version of their post it notes :)

the first half, amazing. i teared up but it, loved the simplicity and word focus. second half when it started talking about the sex memories and fantasies whilst waiting for the principle.... come on. such a male author thing to do. ruined the rest of the book. 5 stars until page 38. 1 for the rest.

would have liked the first half to be shorter. like the second half better :) audiobook narrator was great!

junk metaphors, language and its absurdity at times, formica tables, tala and shaky earth. like a fever dream.

I learned that poetry is planting a bomb in a garden -a masquerade. Language is not free.

Favourite poems:

This is why we dance
Why is anger - even anger - a luxury
to me?
Bulldozers undoing God.
made normal: mornings of mourning
on a breakfast table,
olives, 
za'atar
tomatoes and cucumber
tragedy
tear gas and tea
In Jerusalem, every footstep is a grave.
Things i cannot say
Tell them credulous, clueless audiences,
will strip them of rights
without thought or prayer.
Elderly woman falls asleep on my shoulder

No adjectives in the wind
...
My permit: these wrinkles
older than your country's existence.
My smile is a sun.

Farewell Palestine's Jasmine
we don't need your sympathy, we want your action.