just really bored. definitely reads young to me. 

I cannot imagine a world in which I am anything but irritated at Enzo 

sooo sexual just instantly, with both characters hating each other (one for a very dumb reason!) and yet both imaging fucking each other. it’s the third chapter! please. 

insufferable characters, awkward prose, the weirdest possible retelling. why does this exist. 

Dialogue is awkward, writing is choppy and hard to read. It’s fated mates werewolves and very gendered. 

Didn’t realize this would involve time travel. also WHY would a family who owns funeral homes be so negative about someone owning a flower shop? am I going crazy?? funerals all use flowers! 

all fucking no substance which is fine but I didn’t really love the prose either. 

how are they having sex and the book has barely started, I don’t even know these people yet I know their intimate grooming habits?! no thanks 

I literally can’t remember the characters if I step away from this for a few days. 

Felt like a slog. I was bored.