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this book started off so good. I couldn't put it down. However as I progressed it just felt like the book was repeating itself over and over. Maybe as a blog it was entertaining. however reading it as a book, *yawn*

A short story that made very easy reading.

The initial plotline was gripping and I found it quite direct, in that it held nothing back. Whilst I did enjoy reading it, however, I couldn't help feeling that there was something missing throughout.

Atter considering this, I've decided that it was the lack of detail. Whilst the book was fluid in the events that took place, I feel that I didn't not form enough of a picture in my mind, some more background on the characters I feel would have made them more realistic. In contrast to this I commend the narrative used. By reading through the eyes of both the main characters the reader felt an intamacy as if getting a sneak peak of their point of view on the world.

I understand it was a short story and by adding detail would have bumped this up dratlstically, I feel that by doing this (for instance revealing more background on the Camille and Trevor's younger life, and shedding more light on Trevor and Chelsea's pre-engagement relationship) it would have greatly enhanced the book.

For me personally I love the finer details in a book, as I feel this empowers my imagination, such as what the characters ate, descriptions of their surroundings, etc. Without these details I find that although gripping the story remained 2D for me.

On the whole, I think the story was enjoyable and took a no nonsense approach to getting the plotline across. I would reccomend this book to.maybe friends who don't read or get the the time to read as often.

Although the sex scenes were spicy, and fun,the story itself didn't grab me like the previous two instalments. I found the text rather repetitive with all of the "I love you's" and "trust me's". and although Gideon is a rich man I add beginning to find his wealth unbelievable which kind of annoyed me. it felt like he owned EVERYTHING just for convenience of the story as opposed to because of the character and his history.

I thought this book was the last in the series, however there is sy least another one, and I'm actually rather glad about it. I think if Sylvia had tried to tire up all the loser ends the book would have felt rushed.
I also found myself subconsciously comparing similarities with this book to the fifty shades series. whether the is a good or bag thing,you decide...