I excused the cringe moments in the first book but I can’t excuse them in this book. I wonder if these books were written towards the beginning of her author journey?! I can’t do it. 

The first strike was the fact that it was a why choose (FFMMM) but only the FMC’s had a POV. The second strike was in the prologue the FMC’s are doing spicy things for the first time & it was like she entered by burning core… WHYYYYYY???!!! The third and final strike was (it is a personal problem but still & also SPOILER…) this heffa went ghost just to pop back up 10 years later with 3 partners & a baby ohhh no sis gotta go. 

I just can’t do MMCs that aren’t on their feet call me shallow idgaf also I don’t think young/new adult is for me anymore because you’re 18 doing what?! 

Davina irked tf outta my nerves!!!! I get she’s grieving a huge loss & it takes time to cope with that loss but I get the vibe that she’s stringing Deke along & then when someone got in her hear & talked negatively about him she wanted to give him the cold shoulder like she hasn’t been telling this man that their just friends for over half of this book. & then there’s no romance really in this book to me. I made it to 68% & only two romantic things has happened. At this point I’m ready to go in the book & grab Deke & tell him to stand tf up!!! 

The plot ended up pissing me off & turnt me all the way off & I felt like it was going into predictable territory. I felt like the FMC was going to continue to make dumb stupid decisions 🤷🏾‍♀️

Honestly it was me & not the book… I couldn’t get over the MMC being a thief it didn’t tickle me & my homegirl 😂🥴🤷🏾‍♀️

The author lowkey mentioned the hockey booktok drama that happened last year & it gave me the super ick. 

At times it seemed as though someone with ADHD wrote this book. It’s like the author started with one thought got a new thought & started writing the new thought before finishing the original thought. The plot kind of seemed all over the place as well. 

I think this book is too soft for what I’m in the mood for. There’s no build up we jump straight into what the synopsis says. Like immediately in the first chapter he finds his muse & just for be there wasn’t anything to necessarily keep my attention. I may circle back in the future 🤷🏾‍♀️