amrabad's Reviews (433)

War of Shadows

Emma V.R. Noyes

DID NOT FINISH: 50%

DNF at 49%.

I like the concept. But the editing in this one needs work and the pacing was weird. It was really rushed at the beginning and at 47% it felt like it should be mostly over. 
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No

Honestly glad I’m allergic to latex. But lol at the FMC being named Poppy. 
adventurous dark emotional funny tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No
adventurous emotional tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

Got so amped at the end of this that I had to take off my shirt and sit on the floor. I am unwell.
adventurous fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

It could definitely use some more editing and the ending was kind of rushed, but it was fun. Neat concept too. 
adventurous emotional medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated
medium-paced
adventurous medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No