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skudiklier's Reviews (647)
Moderate: Bullying, Misogyny, Self harm, Suicidal thoughts, Violence
Overall, I enjoyed this book. The way I felt about individual poems varied greatly; I really loved some (more on that below), but others felt like they were trying too hard to sound clever, rather than describing things in a clear or evocative way—using big words, describing things in unusual ways that didn't add to the poems, in my opinion. But this collection overall really has a history; you can feel the strong connections to place and to the past. Despite this, the overwhelming feeling as a reader isn't one of nostalgia, but more a sort of appreciation and understanding, as well as hopefulness.
I loved the structure and rhythm of many of the poems; the third section of "What Grows Here," for instance, was beautiful in terms of its feel, look, and sound. The stanzas of so many poems—"Inventory of Household Items," "Galvanized Gutbucket," "Ode on a BIC Turntable"—were engaging and worked really well in this context.
Other poems like "Perfect Love Song," "Oramil's Dream," "I love you in autumn," and "Ode to North Bay Inn" felt to me like somewhat of a departure from the preceding poems, in a way I really liked. They really captivated me, and left me wanting more of that style in the rest of the collection.
The phrase "my love" was repeated in multiple poems, and I loved the feeling that gave to the collection overall.
The "Notes" section at the end was really illuminating on some of the specifics of the poems, and provided important context for them. I really appreciated all of this, but I almost wish the notes had been underneath individual poems—I don't think the author owes us any explanations, but if you're going to provide them, then I think they'd be more impactful just after they're used, rather than so far removed at the end that a reader might forget their role in the poems.
To end, I just want to share a couple of my favorite lines/sections:
from "All About Birds: An Elegy":
"/In the first place/
refers, my love,
to the peaches we ate on the balcony;
refers, my love,
to the months you first loved me,"
from "H2O":
"If my credit score were higher,
we'd be married, Modesto."
from "Root-Cause Failure Analysis":
"please consider all the ways a thing can go wrong,"
from "A Dream About Steinhart Aquarium":
"The mouth waters; the tide goes out."
This collection blew me away; if I'm being perfectly honest the first two or three poems were lacking something for me, and not having read anything else by this author, I was worried I wouldn't like this collection. But nearly every poem after that was brilliant, and by the end my feelings on this book were totally reversed.
My favorite poems include An Open Letter to Raven Symone, How to Come Out and Stay Out, The Other Black Man, Family Reunion, and Advice from my Grandmother.
Some of the shorter ones pack a really intense punch in between the longer pieces; I usually don't like really short poems, but these ones (such as Insomnia, Correction, and To Existing Being Enough) fit perfectly in this collection.
The poems near the end really started telling a singular story that absolutely gutted me. After finishing this book I definitely want to read more work by this poet, and am so glad I had the opportunity to read this book.
Graphic: Addiction, Alcoholism, Animal death, Body horror, Cancer, Child death, Cursing, Death, Drug use, Gun violence, Hate crime, Homophobia, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Racial slurs, Racism, Rape, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Violence, Grief, Murder
Graphic: Bullying, Child abuse, Child death, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Hate crime, Homophobia, Mental illness, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Racial slurs, Racism, Rape, Self harm, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide, Torture, Transphobia, Violence, Blood, Medical content, Dementia, Grief, Medical trauma, Abortion, Suicide attempt, Death of parent, Murder
Graphic: Ableism, Body shaming, Bullying, Eating disorder, Fatphobia, Hate crime, Misogyny, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Transphobia, Violence, Medical content, Medical trauma
Moderate: Rape, Sexual content
Minor: Alcoholism, Cancer, Death, Drug use, Homophobia, Mental illness, Racism, Suicide, Excrement, Stalking
Graphic: Animal death, Genocide, Racism
Moderate: Death, Violence, Xenophobia, Grief
Minor: Sexual content
Graphic: Body horror, Death, Blood