Too tedious and much too slow. 

The repetition is just too much. 

Reread the first 20% three times and gave up. Seems exciting and great concept but poorly executed and confusing at times.

Had to keep rereading pages. Just didn’t hold my interest. 

First off, I had zero clue that this was the third book in a series. I even went back after finding that out and from the description it isn’t clear.
That aside, it seemed like it would be a cute story but boy was I wrong. I kept waiting for it to get to the cute part but I was more interested in Hailey’s business than anything else. I was so checked out that I actually checked out at 58%. 
Sweet story but it’s just not me.