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While I enjoyed it, I don’t think this needed to be two parts
Pro:
It was an interesting take on wht would happen to Wendy after Neverland
I think the characters were pretty well developed.
Although there wasn’t a huge focus of it, I liked the relationship (friendship lol) Wendy had with her Husband and Friend from psych ward/Employee (I forgot their names already: charles? william? george? and her friend Maria? no clue) I think Wendy was aroace? in this maybe?
Con:
i feel like there was so much build up to Peter’s secret and it wasn’t even all that. Like, it was pretty much what you can already gather from the set up.
(If you like ambiance and world-building this is may be a pro) there was time spent describing shit that couldve been put into the action imo
It was an interesting take on wht would happen to Wendy after Neverland
I think the characters were pretty well developed.
Although there wasn’t a huge focus of it, I liked the relationship (friendship lol) Wendy had with her Husband and Friend from psych ward/Employee (I forgot their names already: charles? william? george? and her friend Maria? no clue) I think Wendy was aroace? in this maybe?
Con:
i feel like there was so much build up to Peter’s secret and it wasn’t even all that. Like, it was pretty much what you can already gather from the set up.
(If you like ambiance and world-building this is may be a pro) there was time spent describing shit that couldve been put into the action imo
2.5*? I barely finished it. This was so boring. I get that it was all about the smut but for almost 400 pages you need to have some more plot or like relationship building or something. I feel like this would have worked better as a shorter piece like a novella
3.5* I was a bit bored at times, but I loved me some Eve. I could do without the other alphas in this one I liked Eve with Adam best
