Seriously needs a proofread.

The pendulum swings at the beginning were a little too much.

And did he walk to town or take a car?

And how extreme was his injury if they could do everything they did?

And it's the middle of a blizzard and he buys her a dress? Which she puts on instead of the flannel pjs?

Hockessin Chick Lit - January 2024

Would have loved a full length novel about this couple.

1. Christmas doesn't even come up until the epilogue which is 14 months later
2. Because it is a novella everything is a fast pace. And as a result the characters depiction suffer.
3. Plot points definitely needed to be fleshed out.

Read very quickly.