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Some of the timeline didn't work. And you don't have to keep telling us about the trust issues of the main character.
Overall I liked the book. I do feel like you would have had a richer experience if you had read The Off-Campus series first.
There was a lot going on in this book and I worried that all of the plot points wouldn't be resolved by the end. Thankfully there is a companion book coming.