I hoped it would get better but the writing is so under developed and needs a serios edit. There are so many little problematic elements all the way through. I just can’t 

I couldn’t get on with the writing style. It felt overly young and awkward and brought me out of the book 

I knew I wasn’t going to get on with this book once I got a few pages in - not into the writing and can’t be doing with the cliched and cheesy feel to it like a bad 90s teen movie 

Absolutely not