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roughly thrown together plot
The idea is there, but there are gaps in the story, and the POV tends to switch randomly in the middle of a paragraph. Could use some editing.
The idea is there, but there are gaps in the story, and the POV tends to switch randomly in the middle of a paragraph. Could use some editing.
