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adventurous mysterious tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

"Whenever I stop, the blood starts, as though only my constant racked shambling can keep the life inside me. As if I'm truly condemned now, to stagger through these midnight halls like the Flying Dutchman, an endless life of pointless travel."

Much more my speed compared to Saturation Point (thanks to a much more competent character found in Gary Rendell, who actually has personality and wit). The author seems to love endings with a twist as we are now two for two. What I really appreciate about his execution is that it doesn't just come out of nowhere; there's little crumbs of foreshadowing leading up to the 'grand reveal', so it ties up the whole novella rather nicely instead of coming across like a cop-out.

In light of the ending, however, I feel we are retroactively left with a general muddiness around character motives that never quite gets cleared up. Then again, the soundness of one's mind is in and of itself questionable after such long bouts of isolation, so contradictory logic might just be par for the course.

adventurous mysterious
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

Dr. Jasmine Marks is an absolutely unbearable character whose trademark dialogue tag is "I said, stupidly (again)"; acknowledging her own stupidity does not salvage the fact that she is supposed to be a scientist of substance, yet she only becomes increasingly more stupid and childish throughout the novella. While this very well might be 'the point' (humans feel entitled to the world, the superiority complex of evolutionary man, yada yada), for me, a novella largely hinges on its characters, given the inherently short nature of the plot and thus the overall story. Ergo, her character's regressive trajectory, whether intentional or unintentional, dealt a lot of damage. 

The writer, to his credit, did a real solid job with everything else (big on the greater themes), and I'll definitely read more from him. I especially liked the analogy of a host's defense system against infection via fever to earth's global warming in response to human destruction, and the ending had a nice little twist as well. Ultimately, however, I found this novella as a whole to be a miss for me because of the insufferable protagonist. Hell, even the side characters who died within a handful of scenes were more worthwhile than our leading lady, in my opinion. #TeamAntagonist
emotional sad fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

White Nights:
"'It will be sad, you know, to be left alone, quite alone, and not even have something to regret—nothing, absolutely nothing… because all that I have lost, all this, it was all nothing, a stupid, round zero—it was merely a dream!’”

Bobok:
”’I don't want there to be any lying. That's all I want, because that's the main thing. On earth it's impossible to live and not to lie, for life and lying are synonymous; well, but here for the fun of it we won't lie. The devil take it, the grave does mean something after all!’”
hopeful reflective medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Yes
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

“The worst was yet to come, he knew. Already he could feel a world of trouble waiting for him behind the next door, but the worst that could have happened was also already behind him; the thing not done, which could have been – which he would have had to live with for the rest of his life.”


What a skill it is to craft a character so comforting and easy to care about as Furlong within the span of such a short novella! Though I wish this was longer, I can appreciate how, ultimately, what matters most is not whatever came next, but simply the fact Furlong allowed his humanity to supersede the socially-conditioned part of him that would've rathered he kept his head down and fulfilled his duties as a complacent cog of an especially barbaric machine. To be human is to go against the selective pressures which attempt to mold this world into a 'survival of the fittest' model and instead chase a form of self-evolution wherein helping others reach the finish-line alongside yourself takes precedence over getting there the fastest.


I had to read this book as a young kid, I think about 4th grade. Absolutely hated it. Maybe I’ll get around to rereading this since I’m older and see if my outlook has changed. The plot was compelling enough but the writing bored me. Even after all these years I think I still remember something about mosquitos...

"When you study history, you must always ask yourself, Whose story am I missing? Whose voice was suppressed so that this voice could come forth? Once you have figured that out, you must find that story too. From there, you begin to get a clearer, yet still imperfect, picture."


Reading this book has changed me.

This is such a powerful story following two half-sisters who never knew each other and their descendants as they journey through the hardships of life in both Ghana and America.

Every chapter held the life, the essence of each family member and witnessing their struggles, their stories unfold was so damn moving and hard. I've cried so many times while reading this book and I've been horrified by its contents and its truths even more so. Each person has their own tale to tell and their own path to take and I truly cared for all of them so much that I hated to see their story end with each chapter. But their stories never came to a close. Their descendants lived on and carried these stories with them throughout their respective lives and looked back on them when hope felt lost. I ached when these characters faced difficulties unlike any other. And I smiled when hope bloomed once more within. The way the author writes the chapter endings in a subtle yet clear way that foreshadows what the future holds for this family is beautiful.

This book inspired me and gave me a feeling I can't quite name. I want to say it feels a little bit like hope.

I'm a first generation Iranian-American. I have lost the ability to speak my mother tongue like I might have been able to if teachers had not informed my mother that I was speaking a language other than English. I cannot even go back in my history past my great-grandparents because records were either never taken or destroyed. My parents haven't told me many stories about their own families or predecessors, and language barriers have hindered me from finding out more on my own. After finishing this book, I have never regretted this fact more.

These stories that are passed down generation to generation, ancestor to descendant, are the most important parts of us, our lives, our history. Live them, tell them. Ask for them, consume them.

History is storytelling.



Beautiful, beautiful book. It truly captured the uncertainty and the emotions teenagers feel in their journey to discovering themselves as adults or in general. There was definitely a couple times where i shed some tears. I wish
Spoilerwe got to see Ari meet Bernardo or get a little more closure on that
and I felt the ending as a whole was a little bit rushed in contrast to the pacing of the rest of the novel, but the pros outweigh these minor cons. In the end, I was very satisfied! Such a heartwarming story.

3.5 stars.

Very character driven book and was a joy to read about the various characters and their perspectives, goals, fears, etc. I loved (and I mean LOVED) Einstein, Nora, and Travis’ dynamic and I read their passages with a smile on my face; they made me so happy! Overall, the character growth and development is excellent and that part of the book is 5 stars. I have nothing more to say on that; I just simply enjoyed how all the characters were written in Watchers.

However, the plot moved quite slow, in my opinion. A lot of the things built up throughout the book are “resolved” in less than 10 pages when you get to the last stretch of the book and everything kinda wrapped up too nicely. Again, from the point of view of me loving the characters and wanting their happy endings, it was really great. But from a plot point of view, it was basic and dry. Koontz could have executed the plot in many different ways and the book would have been stronger as a whole. I personally thought that some side plots that could have been explored and were interesting turned out to end quite abruptly/easily. All that build up with no pay off. 3/5 stars on plot since it was still a solid slow burn that kept me wanting to read more.