too many grammatical errors. i don't always mind but sometimes it hinders the readers ability to get immersed in the story. in this case, that's exactly what happened.

Didn’t finish this book. Not really interested in finishing this book either. The book felt really nonchalant and gave off privileged white male energy. Wouldn’t recommend to other black women

the plot line has SOOOO much potential, but the writing does not flow & i couldn't force it. the overuse of aave was a bit too much for me. describing a vampire as "with the shits" pls? smsjdjdkk. describing a characters lips as "d!ck suckers" just might be TOO "black" for me, idk. the storyline feels everywhere... idk... but the concept of Kildare Bondeaux & his abilities as a vampire had a lot of potential. i would definitely reread this if it was rewritten as a full length novel & maybe a different, more mature/developed writing style?