the worldbuilding was amazing but the characters were flat and i couldn’t connect with them

bored and uninterested in this and already i find the mc cringey 

too slow why did the tournament start 150 pages in 

it’s very atmospherical and i don’t think that’s for me 

i might get back to it, but right now i wasn’t feeling it. and why was the word ‘fucking’ used as an adjective for every other sentence? 

the girls were too petty and over a man who is very clearly a red flag? no thanks. 

nothing was going on…

just not in the mood right now for non fiction 

the way grief was described was beautiful, but that's literally it. the rest of the writing was too cringe for me

dragging too much