I feel like this would have benefitted from dual POV, especially in the first part when the focus was on Will and Graham. The hot and cold dynamic didn't feel necessary without it, and it made some of the early tension feel a little confusing. By the last third, it felt less like a romance and more about Will's damaged relationship with his biological father-which, in the end, seems like what the title You & I, Rewritten was really about. Overall, it was a good book, but it felt like two different stories trying to fit into one. Both had potential, but I think they would've been better told separately.

For the most part, these characters just annoyed me. The book was fine, I guess, but I wouldn't recommend.