aislinghelen's Reviews (1.01k)

It just wasn’t doing it for me. It was too long, too insta lust, and too much with all the secrets that aren’t really secrets

Not quite as good as the first one. It was a bit slower and overly complicated at points. Sometimes it felt like the author was just saying stuff to sound smart, and at others it felt like she was trying to make stupid jumps and hoping no one would catch on. It was a fun read, and I did really enjoy the duet but I just wish the second book had been better.

It also has a trope I really hate

amnesia, I mean really??

Loved the story but the writing wasn’t great. There were sentences felt overwritten and a lot of places that felt very jumpy. It regularly had italicised paragraphs that flashed back to something, and honestly they didn’t feel necessary most of the time. Personally I just kind hate flashbacks though, so it might be me.

I did really enjoy the plot. It was interesting and I never wanted to put it down. There were some parts that felt a bit random but I think that’s hard to avoid. I do wish we got more of a wrap up. There were some things I really wanted answers to but we got a “that happened, no clue why” instead.

Overall, it was a great story but could have used a bit more editing in parts.

Not for me

I just can’t get into it. I don’t like the writing style, and it’s kinda hard to follow 

I did really enjoy this but I also thought there was a bit much going on. Most of it was absolutely adorable but I’m really bad with second hand embarrassment, so the sex lessons stuff was a bit uncomfortable for me. 
I liked the fake dating aspect and all the little micro tropes but

WHY WAS THERE A VEGAS WEDDING?? Like there are already fake dating, sex lessons, grumpy sunshine, secretly in love and then they add drunk marriage and a random sex tape?

. I think there was so much thrown in that we also lost some other storyline’s.

Like her ex husband calling her repeatedly despite being being divorced for years? Where did that all go?

 

Overall, it was completely adorable but has little too much thrown in.

I think this one just wasn’t for me. I didn’t particularly like either of the main characters and the whole thing felt kind of floppy(?). The middle part was fun enough but the rest of it just didn’t hold up for me.

This was really inetresting and a very necessary read in the current world we live in. It was fast and a quick read, although sometimes that wasnt helpful. For the most part it was great but I did think that some of it would have benefited from being longer and slightly more expanded on. Overall, it was great and I recommend reading it.