I wanted to love this, and I loved the premise, but the Scottish dialect was awkward and drew me out of the story (I think just say someone is Scottish and write the dialogue normally unless it’s a comedy/drama? Just my opinion!)

Then the way Helen is described - it’s almost like she’s being negged? She almost looked attractive in a certain light, at a certain angle?! And constant reference to her small breasts that were surprisingly ok?!

No taa