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Office Maxi by Aaron Frale
3.25
adventurous emotional funny mysterious tense fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

I won my copy during a Storygraph giveaway.

Overall, it’s a fun read. Something you could classify as Brain Candy, y’know? I thought that the characters were enjoyable and the plot’s intriguing enough that I’ll keep an eye out for the next one.

However, this did need a second round of editing (a few punctuation mistakes, a wrong your, and an unfinished sentence) and I wish the explanation of “what’s up” happened earlier in the book. The story also gets a little bogged down with RPG Character Technical Details in a few places, but that’s fairly infrequent.