While there were some genuinely creepy parts, on the whole this was pretty predictable. I also felt like it needed to be at least 30-50 more pages to develop some inconsistencies and characters, or it needed to be edited down by about that many pages.  There were just several holes in the plot, unnecessary characters and not enough development on the horror elements.

I loved the main character's descent in here though.  It was maybe the most ominous part of the story.