this takes between 5-10 minutes to read from start to finish, so if you are looking for something super quick and easy? this is defiantly an option for that.

the writing had potential but sadly wasn’t able to actually go anywhere since this was just way too short for anything at all.

the entire thing had a “fast introductions are made and then this happens and then this and than this and this and this and done!” feel to it.

there is no real try in making the reader connect with the story, be it the romance or the part of how much the character loves the land she grew up on.
it’s just too rushed and too short for any of that.

as i said i can see potential but as it is?
sorry it’s just not enough!