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The Gemstone by Sarena And Sasha Nanua
1.0

Well....I tried. This book was just written to the point that I couldn't read it anymore past page 60. There was so many pieces of unnecessary information and random details that didn't need to be there, that it was probably double the length that it had to be. There was a lot that also seemed to be written out of order or skipped around without giving the characters time to make things happen. For example, one sentence involved Arica watching the movers bring her bed in through the front door. She turns and walks back into her room and her mom has left her sketchbook on her bed. How does all that happen in 3 seconds? This was just a very unorganized book and though I feel like it could have gone somewhere, I think with the writing style as it is, it won't be going anywhere for me.