I think this was a riveting story, beautiful writing, but just way too long. I feel like it could have been shaved down to a smaller story with the same impact. The length made me feel annoyed with Addie and Luc, and at times I just didn't care about what Addie was doing or thinking. I just wanted her to get on with it.

I marked that this has spoilers. Unsure if it does or not.