This was...fine. Not really developed enough in pretty much every aspect, in my opinion. The world building was confusing and none of the characters are really that fleshed out. It makes the plotline difficult to follow and just makes it difficult to get into the book overall. 

The art is good, though! That part is done well. Some of the writing definitely left something to be desired, though. If it's supposed to be a series, maybe it will get better?