The main character's anxieties and insecurities were written well and the communication of her insecurities within the relationship was done well. The concept is a bit out there but fun. It was too insta-lovey for my taste, and I know that the first chapter was initially a one-shot. But I kind of wish the first chapter was a one time thing and then we could build things back up again, or that emotional feelings would develop fully later rather than sooner. I'm just nit-picky since I don't like insta-love, but their dynamic in the relationship was very cute, him wanting and getting excited to do relationship things like having her leave her toothbrush and other stuff at his house.