+ for unique concept

- for (ENDING SPOILER!!) 

happy ending...not that splats can't have happy endings but it just didnt work for me

all the inner monologue annoyed me idk why. Just the MC crying over and over again how he fucked up his life
One chapter (or a few idk) in the middle were super boring and a complete waste of time and pages. Like they could be completely removed and it wouldnt even change the story.


ps. Jess needs to leave Nick's bitch ass.