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The Marriage Pass by Briana Cole
2.0

I dived into this book expecting that it is a romance with sexy scenes. There weren't even enough erotic scenes! Even if a scene even started as erotic, was handled too badly and was ended up before even being sexy, if that makes sense? It was like the author tried to make it erotic, but failed. This was basically a messy read with cheating trope. The first person narrative from a fuckboy didn't work well. And the mystery part was there only to do nothing! Neither the romance, nor the mystery was strong enough to make this read enjoyable.

I am constantly frustrated with Dorian, how he cheated on his wife. And the excuses he made to himself about cheating. And then he justifies his actions by saying that he still loved his wife? Sorry, but I couldn't like him till the last page. It was really messy and the synopsis really was misleading.