I think the writing has improved from the first book but admittedly I mostly skimmed it. I hadn't planned on reading it but I found myself constantly wondering "what will Kitt do?" 

2 stars for the long boring body of the book, way too much back and forth and repetitiveness and ohmygid theres the fanfic feel again

3.5 stars for the last few pages, damn cliffhanger will probably have me reading the next book even though I already half can't be bothered... I am developing a not-quite-love/not-quite-hate relationship with this series