Breath of the Dragon is a quick, easy read to enjoy. The simple, classic feel of the story, combined with the not-as-annoying-as-they-could-be characters, makes this a top-tier YA in my opinion. Fonda Lee is an excellent writer; she knows how to present a magical world and truly excels when describing the fight scenes, the latter of which is crucial to what I see as the spirit of this story. 

From Bruce to Shannon, I think this story benefits from its origins. It feels familiar and inhabited by its original orator and audience. 

It's hard to describe any complaints without getting into spoilers. Suffice it to say, I can't help but see the illogical holes in these fictional, fantastical societies, or the illogical assumptions and choices the main character makes. However, it's not the type of book where I feel the need to linger on those thoughts; I'll just let it go and enjoy it for what it was.