This was too much with too little in all ways possible for me. 

The idea was good and it could have been an interesting story but the short story formt didn’t allow for enough build up, anticipation and interest to build for me to care. I didn’t care what the characters went though or why they  did it or any of that befreundet didn’t know the characters nor did I feel like I wanted too. 

The plot itself could have been good but it felt to rushed and to compressed to really get there and actually be good. Again could have been well done with an actual longer story but in short story format too many things happened to rapidly one after the other while at the same time never really being explained enough for me to want to see that much action happen.


Clearly this didn’t work for me, sadly.

If you are looking for mindless action and don’t mind not getting to now anything or anyone or really getting a clear picture of any questions - go for it. 


Other wise? Maybe not the right story for you.