“His emerald orbs gazed at her lithe body and admired her chestnut locks”
Is not a direct quote but it could be. This book has twice as many adjectives it needs and managed to cram in entire thesaurus.

I have so many questions. 
-She just gets over 20+ years of abuse overnight?
-And masters magic her first try?
-Why does he carry her everywhere?
-You expect me to believe these 30 year old soldiers played hide and seek? And had a “hands-in/team” moment?
-Why can’t you just call it hair? Why does it have to be locks? And why do you have to tell me it’s chestnut colored every time?
-Why the obsession with baked goods? To the point that she has to make a speech about it in court?
-They spent half the book having unprotected sex but neither of them want kids? Seriously?

And ethically should he even have a relationship with the girl so soon after everything she’s experienced? You’re literally the first people she meets after being chained to a wall in a cave for 21 years and you only wait like 3 weeks to make a move? I get it, you’re mates, blah blah blah, but you didn’t know it yet and you totally could’ve let her adjust to the outside world