Very strong start! Like really really good! But I didn't like how possessive Brendan became (he was so sweet at first!! and he kinda kept it throughout but definitely not enough to override how "ok dude calm down" possessive he was), nor just like... how generally, never-endingly horny they were? And as always I WILL be complaining because there could have been so many other things for the third-act conflict but it was just like nope so many shenanigans that we'll just breeze through in the last 35 pages. However, I would die for Piper. Anyway we will be reading the sequel.