It’s really my own fault for continuing with this series after book two was so repetitive that it could have been an email. But I pushed through, mostly casue

I needed to be able to call Kai a whiny bitch if he was butt hurt about Paedyn accepting Kitt’s offer instead of dying. And he WAS a whiny bitch the entire book!!! You had so many chances you loser! You made your bed now lie in it

There was so much nonsense. The formatting was a nightmare. The way information is released was so disjointed. The characters motivations came out of left field

kitt’s plans make no sense for his actions!! Also, his decent into madness should have started all the way in the first book. He KNEW there was a chance that peadyn was his sister, and STILL tried to marry her? Also his the way he talked about his BROTHER was so oddly homoerotic. Why was there so much incest in this book?!? And then they named DAUGHTER after him? Get away from me. I hate it

 

Just like every other book it needed two or three more round of editing. It needed to cut at LEAST 3k words of nonsense. 

The plagiarism allegations are not going away with this book. 

Overall it was 50% derivative nonsense, 25% horrible dialogue, 15% Kai and Paedyn being annoying

we can’t be together, but we will flirt regularly and constantly infront of your fiancé who is also my brother but wait HOW does he know we still want each other? We’ve been so sneaky! Let’s have sex on top of my sister’s grave

, 7% actually enjoyable content, 3% incest.