This is bad. Like it's really bad. Think bad fanfiction on watpad 20 years ago.

They've included EVERY trope, like everything they could think of has been added in. The characters are absolutely horrible, especially the many men. How are we supposed to root for anyone who's that awful? There's several quotes which are lifted from other fandoms like Twilight almost exactly. The dramatised audio is distracting and a bit rubbish. And don't get me started on the character who wouldn't stop speaking in a bad spanglish.

This said, I've totally ordered book two from the library. This is utter trash but it might just draw me back...