This was….alright. 

Very abrupt romance, which seems out of character for Logan. We didn’t know until about halfway through that Logan is bisexual, all the lead up is vague speculation, so up until they literally start hardcore flirting/lightly touching there was no hint of romance on Logan’s end. Also Kosoko Jackson’s main POV characters tend to be very judgmental and Xavier is no exception. Lots of small town judgement that is overt, but also lots of subtle comments sprinkled throughout as well that aren’t ever really reckoned with. 

Another abrupt change: there was an extreme shift from “I hate small towns and the people who are in them have achieved nothing with their lives” for the first 70% and then at 80% he’s like “how dare people judge small towns.” Which is like….what he has been doing this whole time. And it’s not until like the 90% mark that he has a few moments of self reflection about why small towns might not be so bad after all. Quite the tonal shift without a lot of acknowledgement from Xavier.