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The Alpha's True Mate by Jaymin Snow
2.0

I wanted to love this bevause it is an interesting approach to the shifter story but there are too many errors.

How can it be Friday and the next day be a class day?

Words missing all over the place. Tenses wrong. Pull out a thesaurus every once in a while.

I assume the friend who watched Harry didn't make it but what was she? Not shifter. Not healer. But what?

So much time was spent building up the beginning that the end seemed rushed.