mythicaldelenn 's review for:

DID NOT FINISH

I was flying through this and really enjoying the writing and the characters until about half way through. The plot started getting really convenient and all the characters were making stupid decisions, which bothered me because we're told that they're smart. The characters did things that should not have been possible in the context. It was clear that the author either didn't do enough research on how big companies work or chose to use inaccurate assumptions to make the plot possible. That may not have bothered me as much if the characters motivations had made sense, but it was still a glaring issue for me and would have bothered me either way. I also started noticing how cheesy some of the dialogue is. I get why people love this, it was just impossible for me to connect once the plot convenience/technical issues came up so it wasn't worth finishing for me.