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miyawakiss 's review for:
A Blue Ribbon Romance
by C.M. Nascosta
I was very excited to get Rourke's POV but unfortunately, I felt this book let me down. I had really enjoyed Morning Glory Milking Farm and I feel that this book couldn't hold a candle to it.
An issue I had with MGMF that I was able to overlook then somehow got so much worse in this book and that was the transitions from present to past and then to present again. There were quite a lot of scenes where Rourke would be doing something in the present and then suddenly we're thrown back into his memory, spend PAGES there and then suddenly with no warning, we're back in the present. The transition is jarring and confusing and I often had to recalibrate and check which part of the story we're at. I had to reread a few scenes just to make sure I'm getting it right. It really took away from the reading experience and I was unable to really immerse myself in the plot and character.
An issue I had with MGMF that I was able to overlook then somehow got so much worse in this book and that was the transitions from present to past and then to present again. There were quite a lot of scenes where Rourke would be doing something in the present and then suddenly we're thrown back into his memory, spend PAGES there and then suddenly with no warning, we're back in the present. The transition is jarring and confusing and I often had to recalibrate and check which part of the story we're at. I had to reread a few scenes just to make sure I'm getting it right. It really took away from the reading experience and I was unable to really immerse myself in the plot and character.