I really liked the form that this verse novel takes. The line breaks are purposeful and give them a different meaning at times. It kept the story moving but it didn't feel rushed. I know this book is for kids but I thought it was funny that a girl joining the baseball team was such a mindblowing concept to Trace. I also wish that the TBI could have been talked about more but I understand that the TBI wasn't the point of the book, it was just a reason for Will to change and turn to drugs.