I thought this story had really interesting worldbuilding.
However, the story was 33k words long, and could have used another 30k to flesh it out and maybe also make better transitions between the scenes? At one point I actually went to look up the file on my laptop, because I thought my ereader must have eaten some pages. There was a big buildup to a magicky thing, and then suddenly it was after and it was all done. I'm still not sure if some scenes somehow got lost. Then again, since I checked both the epub and mobi files, both directly from the publishers website, it seems like it was just a style choice of some sort?