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DID NOT FINISH: 41%

I was so excited for this one, the blurb itself was brilliant and the story had SUCH potential. Unfortunately it fell flat of my expectations. I felt like I was being told rather than shown a lot, and the enemies to lovers aspect needed work. At times the characters themselves felt quite superficial and under-developed. Because of this I didn’t finish it but it has all the makings of a brilliant book if it’s fleshed out and edited more.