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Kiss My Putt by Tara Sivec
3.0

I'm... disappointed. I really really really wanted to like this and it's a really great plot and I really like the originality of the characters. I've never read something like this and I really wanted to love this book. Birdie and Palmer are so cute, it's a beautifully written friends-to-enemies-to-lovers.

But the amount of spelling and grammar mistakes really ruined it for me. One of my favorite lines in the entire book "I’m like a dying man in the dessert who sees a body of water. Except it’s a body of water that looks great from a distance but will rearrange your face if you drink it. Birdie is my body of water, and I need a goddamn drink before I pass out, so… goodbye, pretty face" ....

I will say, the rain always does it though. “Because you weren’t here! And I just wanted you, and I was too afraid to tell you, and then you walked away from me so fucking easily, and I couldn’t breathe, and he made me forget for just one second that you didn’t want me!”

Overall, I think it's an okay book. But another run through with an editor would have done so much for this book.