Alas, while this story had my catnip written all over it (blue collar, brothers, veterans), there were just a few things that kept me from fully embracing this story.

I love the concept of veterans forming a company to help their own, and I'll be interested to read more in the series to see if it tightens up.

Some of my content issues are hidden behind the spoiler:

Spoiler

fatphobic comments from both Reid and Naomi - Reid says Naomi needs to eat more because she's too skinny. Naomi wishes that her ex has gotten fat as revenge.
Lots of declarations of needing to be professional, but with characters that consistently act unprofessional, including Naomi and Reid

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